Hi AJ! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like your post because you explained what a fractured fairytale was very clearly, it also made sense and I could see how to write with yours.
This reminds me of the time we were doing fairy tales as our topic for writing, we had to use a fairytale and write them in three tenses. Past, present (the one which was hardest) and future.
To improve your post a nice introduction would be really welcoming and nice. I thought that your story was pretty cool. How long have you been on this topic for?
Hi AJ! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like your post because you explained what a fractured fairytale was very clearly, it also made sense and I could see how to write with yours.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the time we were doing fairy tales as our topic for writing, we had to use a fairytale and write them in three tenses. Past, present (the one which was hardest) and future.
To improve your post a nice introduction would be really welcoming and nice. I thought that your story was pretty cool. How long have you been on this topic for?
Great work!
Mia